Laura Whyte
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Sunday, March 15, 2015
Athletics
I heard the shot put smash into the ground.
I heard a "Well done!" from the others supporting me.
I saw a smile appear on my Mum's face.
I felt my heart pounding non-stop.
I felt an exploding burst of relief.
I wondered if I could beat m
y record next time.
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Anonymous
March 17, 2015 at 2:14 PM
awesome laura I wish i could write like that
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awesome laura I wish i could write like that
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