Sunday, March 15, 2015

Athletics


I heard the shot put smash into the ground.
I heard a "Well done!" from the others supporting me.
I saw a smile appear on my Mum's face.
I felt my heart pounding non-stop.
I felt an exploding burst of relief.
I wondered if I could beat  my record next time.









1 comment:

  1. awesome laura I wish i could write like that

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