My imaginary person

Rosie is a country girl who is very sporty and loves hanging out with her friends. She has ginger red hair,bright blue eyes strawberry red lips. She loves animals drawing and going out and helping out on the farm.

Rosie is amazing.

My unique brother

He is a country kid who loves going on the farm and playing in the sandpit. He is an average Year 4. He has ginger hair with bright red ears, brown dotty  freckles and light blue eyes. He likes building  toy farms and playing on the Ipod. He likes watching T.V  and he is a smart kid even though he doesn't show it.

He is a unique brother.

For reading I read a story called War in Waihi and I wrote what the miners wanted to happen.

• We want to be paid more because we are  paid less than other miners in the country and  we have  to work faster.

• Our working conditions are terrible  like after an explosion  we have to work in the dust which can give us  a deadly lung disease.

• We are expected to work extremely fast in all conditions  and even dangerous ones.

• No one wants to help us because they don’t  want to cause any trouble for the mine by taking sides.

I read a story called the Grateful crane and wrote a new ending for it.

There in the room they saw not a girl but a crane, weaving her own feathers.“It cannot be!,” gasped the old man, clutching his wife's hand. The crane looked at the couple.

“Yes I am the bird you freed that day. I was granted my wish to become a human so I could repay you.” Tears flooded in the man's eyes.

“I could have stayed with you for ever but now that you know who I really am I must leave.” She stood up  and walked over to them and bowed. The old man grabbed her and pulled her over to a room and locked the door. “Now you will stay here and make as many blankets as my heart desires, and if you don’t, I won’t feed you so you better do as you're told.” So she got to work making blankets. But one day she realised that there was a  secret door hidden  in the wall and it was unlocked. One day when the couple were out at the market,  she went through the passage. The passage lead her outside. She flew away and the couple never saw her again.  

         

                  Laura  Whyte

I am a country girl who loves going on the farm and having fun with my family and friends.

I have sky blue eyes,light red lips and  dark chocolate hair.

I like playing most sports and getting competitive.

I love animals.

I am AMAZING!!!

A new day

The autumn leaves of red,yellow and orange, lay sprinkled on the mossy green rocks.

The mossy green rocks of all shapes and sizes are scattered along the edge of the stream’s path.

The crystal clear stream flows down through the green leafy bush.

The stream flows over the rocks, dropping steeply down forming the waterfalls that flows into a clear deep pond.

The sunlight shines down through the bush waking up into a new day.

Swamp Football

I am walking forward and getting submerged in mud while chasing the ball and slowly pushing forwards through it.

I am struggling to kick the ball through the chunky, mucky mud because I am slipping and sliding all over the place.

I am crazily running around like a headless chicken, then exhaustingly flopping to the ground after a long hard
mucky, sloppy game.